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r3nder
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#1
Name and surname: arron smith
Place of birth:  london
Blood status: 100%
Characteristics: stong build, smart, brave and a good learner 
Character appearance: a young man who has green eyes brown hair strong build
Character's story: He is a boy who has died and he has not heard about him social anxiety

Give correct answers:
Midfielder StudentClass1 [StevenJeffkins]: Hi, what's your name?
hi, my name is aaron smith what's your name?

Midfielder UczeńKlasa1 [StevenJeffkins] (Hey, you know where is the Palace of Culture in Warsaw?)
i do not know the way sir
Helper UczeńKlasa1 [StevenJeffkins]: * you pass a plate filled with a soup *
and find try to look for it's owner to give it to him if not found and will put it in a safe place That can be seen

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IxuGaming
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Posty: 198
Tematy: 31
Paż 2015
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Gryffindor
#2
The application is too short. 
If u can, write in polish language, please.
You can see other player's applications to inspire yourself

And... you cant take a 100% blood status. You can take a: 75%, 50%, 25% or 0%

Smith is a canon surname. Without consent, you can't take it to your character. 
Rejected / Odrzucone
Game is only in Polish language. If you can't speak in polish language you can have a little problem with this
"Trzeba być bardzo dzielnym by stawić czoło wrogom, ale tyle samo męstwa wymaga wierność przyjaciołom"[Obrazek: https://media.giphy.com/media/Bh3YfliwBZNwk/giphy.gif]
r3nder
Czarodziej




Posty: 2
Tematy: 1
Cze 2019
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#3
IxuGaming napisał(a): (25.06.2019 02:52)
The application is too short. 
If u can, write in polish language, please.
You can see other player's applications to inspire yourself

And... you cant take a 100% blood status. You can take a: 75%, 50%, 25% or 0%

Smith is a canon surname. Without consent, you can't take it to your character. 
Rejected / Odrzucone
to make it longer i can try but i cant speak in polish english is my second language so i type in english
IxuGaming
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Posty: 198
Tematy: 31
Paż 2015
130
Gryffindor
#4
well... try write longer in English then
"Trzeba być bardzo dzielnym by stawić czoło wrogom, ale tyle samo męstwa wymaga wierność przyjaciołom"[Obrazek: https://media.giphy.com/media/Bh3YfliwBZNwk/giphy.gif]



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